Log Line: Two boys crave animal crackers from a vending machine that has one left.
Treatment: Boy#1 is sitting in class and we hear his stomach growl. He spots the teacher eating animal crackers and immediately craves some.
Same situation with another boy#2 who is also craving animal crackers.
We cut back to the vending machine that has only one last bag of animal crackers.
They both end up staring at each other and then looking at the snack.
The first boy looks anxiously at the clock.
Now the other boy looks at his cell phone watch. As soon as the bell rings they both make a run for the animal crackers. The second boy, coming from the same class, tries racing him there and after a few cuts between them the first boy wins.
They both take different directions there hoping for reaching there first.
This boy who is very excited pulls out a crisp dollar puts it in with a big smile on his face. The other boy is shown behind him angry. Then he presses A1 but machine doesn't work. His smile fades away as the boy sees (POV) a "Broken Machine" sign. The second boy laughs.
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